Mine to Keep
Once the rays of dawn approach
the distress of fallen night will sleep.
And wandering out toward mystery's voice,
I dreamt your love was mine to keep.
the distress of fallen night will sleep.
And wandering out toward mystery's voice,
I dreamt your love was mine to keep.
The soft parade of Winter's decay
has drowned the leaf that once was young.
But I'm the tree kept alive by love's bright song,
and you're the bird that has always sung.
Published by Dan Reveal
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19 Comments
Post a CommentThat is lovely!
This is excellent, Dan. You have real talent. :-)
All I can say is WOW! This is very, very impressive writing, pal. :)
this is such a pleasent heartfel poem. Great job.
This is beautiful!
Pretty...in words and picture.
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Thank you to everyone for putting such nice comments here. It means a lot!
This is so lovely....I had to comment again when I saw it was on "Most Comments" today...a rightful place indeed!
Well isn't this just the most beautiful poem going? Thanks, I really enjoyed it!