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  • Mike Hatz10/12/2009

    Sweet. And vaguely risque, I might add!

  • AnnaB10/7/2009

    Very well written

  • Nora9/30/2009

    Interesting poem.

  • Jennifer Waite9/25/2009

    Interesting piece! Liked the short, concise "bite" it had. Thanks.

  • Roz Zurko9/25/2009

    Nice job. I with Janet, the poem brings things to mind from years ago.

  • Johnny Yuma9/25/2009

    Thanks everyone. My wife and I weren't really fussing--I just needed something to write. She loved the poem though. She doesn't take time to read many of mine but I called this one to her attention and she liked it. Thanks again! Johnny

  • Janet Hunt9/25/2009

    Very good, brings back some of my own "remembrances."

  • John Smither9/24/2009

    Nice poem Johnny, for some reason I have not been receiving any notices of your being published. I have now re clicked the button to receive these.

  • Walton S. Tissot9/24/2009

    very nice. A moment in time

  • Langley Cornwell9/23/2009

    Close the curtains, literally and figuratively. Love this one.

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