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  • Kristie Leong M.D.2/19/2008

    I like the way you use the leaf and the bank to symbolize something much larger. Another beautiful Haiku.

  • A. P. Maslow1/6/2008

    That's beautiful

  • Harry Gunawan1/4/2008

    Life is meandering alright and often complicated. What the most important thing is no matter what, we know that life is keep flowing... Well done! I really love this poem! :-D

  • TYE MARTIN1/3/2008

    Reminds me of the flow of life suddenly being interrupted by situaiton and circumstances. But life still keeps going upstream. Very nice!!

  • Kady Burney12/31/2007

    LOVE IT!!!! YAY!!!!!! what a great writer you and how you capture everything so beautifully!!!!!

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