160 Character Poems

Brandon Elliott
Earlier this week, my power was out due to a powerful wind/rainstorm. It was out for a day and a half, so I was reduced to writing via cell phone for that period of time. My cell phone has a memo pad in it in which you can only use 160 characters, so I decided to write a couple 160 character poems. They are really dreary since I was bummed about the power being out, but enjoy.

Darkness

As I'm sitting here in my misery,
complete darkness.
Except for the light caused by
the weakness in my heart.
I am just an image of nothing.
Empty space.
See me?

Holes

Sometimes I feel like I dig holes
that aren't big enough.
and then I bury myself in shame,
the only friend I have in this world.
Something to fill my absences with.

Published by Brandon Elliott

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  • Geannie M. Bastian2/17/2009

    dreary yes, but a cool creative exercise. Well done.

  • CJ Mathis2/14/2009

    I wish I was a good poet.

  • Jennifer Wagner2/14/2009

    Here's a poem for you, since you're a guy, for the NEXT power outage:
    The power's out, I cannot see. I have to sit if I want to pee......... :-)

  • Bandit2/14/2009

    great work :)

  • Tamara Waters2/14/2009

    Neat experiment - you did pretty good!

  • Tracy DeLuca2/14/2009

    What an interesting challenge to give yourself! These are actually pretty good!

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