1st Dry Season Haiku

Harry Gunawan
glaring sun blinds me
as I walk this dusty road
bathing in the sweat

Published by Harry Gunawan

A positive-minded person, stays and spends entire life mostly in Jakarta, capital city of Indonesia. Consider oneself as an (e)ntrepreneur and also an artist of life.  View profile

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  • Hope Mitchell8/23/2009

    almost was with you..

  • Nikki3/22/2008

    good job on this!

  • ILAKKUVANAR MARAIMALAI2/24/2008

    Sweet and appealing!A very fine poem!

  • jcorn2/24/2008

    I am coming to appreciate the Haiku form more, partially from reading haikus like this. The sense of immediacy and the brief but often deeper message in such a short form is very appealing. I could almost feel that glaring sun and heat!

  • Steven West2/22/2008

    This haiku made me perspire. Very well done.

  • 3lilangels2/22/2008

    so short but says alot wonderful job.

  • Pauline Abreu2/22/2008

    Nice haiku Harry!

  • K. Jai Estes2/22/2008

    WONDERFUL haiku! I love it!

  • Stephen Joltin2/22/2008

    No humidity but the heat smothers you to death. Excellent haiku.

  • Dee2/22/2008

    Very nice!!

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