2 Short Untitled Poems

Allana Calhoun
Why does it happen?
It's such a sad subject.
In one's deep sorrow
it's not hard to reject
the horrible idea
of somebody's death.

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I can't possibly describe
my feelings for you.
Whenever you're around
i never feel blue.
I've liked you alot
since you've entered my lfe.
You came and took away
all my sadness and strife.

[Poetry Notebook: Date Unknown]

Published by Allana Calhoun

I'm a working mother who has been writing poetry and short stories since I was a child. I also do crafts and create handmade jewelry.  View profile

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  • Ana Maria Alvarez5/22/2009

    I love both, short but sweet. I think the second one could possibly relate to the first. Deaths are terrible, especially when that person has touched your life so deeply. Or like for some like me, just acknowledging that death occurs and it takes with it the joy that makes your life so much more living for. I read gravestones sometimes, and its always somber.

  • andrew5/21/2009

    the 1st one was the best

  • Dan Reveal5/21/2009

    Great. Thank you very much!

  • 3lilangels5/20/2009

    Very nice!!!!!

  • Lady Samantha5/20/2009

    I like the first one better! But I think you should extend it a little bit if you can. Good stuff!

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