A Balcony Overflowing

Dan Reveal
Let this wine be an oath upon thy lips,
as good fortune is to greater things.
That the world of thy nearness shall at last be brought to life,
and lets me wear the coat of crimson kings.

Wave thy bright and tranquil hand,
that I may make peace with the dragons of thy Medieval trance.
The cottages of our slumber shall not be built from faltering words,
for I have found my life's song in thy loving glance.

For as ye speak, I feel caressed
in the bitter of my deepest brow.
Let the winds cease from barking at thy heels in envy.
Let them see the pretty of thy face as I do now.

Let them see the pretty of thy face as I do now.

Published by Dan Reveal

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  • Shelly Barclay3/30/2011

    I agree with Paul. Very Shakespearean.

  • A. Kaelin3/29/2011

    Excellent!

  • Paul Rance3/28/2011

    Very Shakespearian. Like it.

  • Candice L. Collins3/28/2011

    love this one!!!

  • John Myers3/28/2011

    Love it Dan!

  • Sandy James3/27/2011

    Very nice, Dan.

  • Sunshine Wilson3/27/2011

    Great work :-)

  • carol gibson3/27/2011

    This is a really good one with the balcony and cottage imagery threading through it. Thanks, Dan.

  • Langley Cornwell3/27/2011

    Ah yes, wonderful.

  • Bethany R. Marsh3/26/2011

    : )

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