A Butterfly Cinquain About Junk Food

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Maria Roth
My Last Meal

French fries
Dipped in ketchup,
Nacho Cheese Doritos,
Strawberry cheesecake concrete--mmm!
Cookies,
Carrot cake with cream cheese icing,
Key lime pie, more popcorn,
Homemade fudge for
Dessert.

(Author's notes:
I didn't know what the heck a "cinquain" was before today. Read more about cinquains here: http://www.cinquain.org/.

A "concrete" is a heavenly blend of frozen custard and toppings. I hope you already knew that and that you've already eaten at least one. My favorite spot for concretes in the Kansas City area is Sheridan's.

I do not endorse eating nonstop junk food...)

Published by Maria Roth

I love popcorn, cashews, cheesecake, Jane Austen, my husband and children, and Conan O'Brien. Why should you be jealous of me? I am double-jointed in both thumbs, I live in Kansas, I'm tall, and I'm modest...  View profile

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  • bla bla bla5/5/2010

    this poem is weird but kinda cool :)

  • John Myers6/20/2009

    I do cinquains all the time with my students. Love this one!

  • Nancy Tracy5/25/2009

    Clever!! BTW, that concrete concept has not made its way West yet... at least to my city. Could they maybe give it a more appetizing name? I'm envisioning quite a heavy stomach after eating it.

  • Oodles5/9/2009

    I wanna try the Strawberry cheesecake concrete!

  • Douglas Bilodeau4/29/2009

    'Concrete' sounds great! It all does. Except for the Doritos. Too close to Fritos, which I ate as a kid on a long car trip. Car sick - had to hang my head out the window. Bleachhhh. Still have an aversion to them 50 odd years later.

  • Rebecca Wrenn4/27/2009

    Maria, the reason this is your last meal is because it made you so sick, you died! Save yourself--send the cheesecake my way! (^;^) P.S. Almost all of my family live in the Kansas City area, too.

  • Stoneskin4/27/2009

    That is quite a rich combination of desserts. You don't want to be sick after your last meal do you?!

  • Lori Piper4/22/2009

    I am so wanting dessert right now

  • Dawn Reavis4/22/2009

    Yummy!

  • K. Karl4/20/2009

    You are going to blow my diet!

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