A Carpathian Vector and the Bloody Owl

Walton S. Tissot
What wonders found under dark shaded eve,

As fated outcast and retch mingle well

And might so find the devil ere their leave

May then that some stray all knowing for sell,

On lark or pressing hope of dream deferred,

Pressure and fear of coop and of hammer,

Into early morn, fractured voices slurred,

Alive, breath and pulse, the city Clamor;

Though as of yet not fully found nor held,

For any span at real peace with the clock,

Like reception of any yoke dispelled

Contented in sublime artistic shock;

From this, all that was, enrich fertile soil

That then restraint take leave and blood may boil.

Published by Walton S. Tissot

~ Walton S. Tissot is a pseudonym of William S. Tribell - *{PLEASE FEEL FREE: Anyone who enjoys the work, to Tweet, Dig, Blog, Tell a friend or anyway otherwise share and or promote it.}* - Born in America,...  View profile

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  • carol gibson7/15/2009

    Wow - intense imagery.

  • mimpi7/1/2009

    This is truly classic!

  • cecil hickman6/29/2009

    a truly wonderful piece in a style that has almost been forgotten,,wonderfully written,,blessings..Cecil

  • Tina Twito6/25/2009

    Nicely done. I get more from this with every read. Like the Langston Hughes reference. I'll bet the Carpathians are steeper than a crystal stair. (Thanks for the comment!Adding you to faves.)

  • Paul Rance6/5/2009

    Love the classic style of this poem.

  • G.L. Morrison5/17/2009

    The dark humor that runs beneath your verbiosity, tickles my inner word-snob, before it lodges in my cerebellum like an owl pellet (unfleshed: inedible bits wrapped in its own skin) and leaves me to wonder if I am the recipient of the literate joke or the butt of it. Retch, on lark and dream deferred indeed. I applaud, shrivel and/or implode.

  • Jennifer Waite5/13/2009

    Quite lovely to find a piece of 'real' writing on AC! I hope to get some poetry up here soon, and show the world I am more than just my recipes, restaurant reviews and how-to guides!! Thanks for sharing this.

  • ILAKKUVANAR MARAIMALAI5/7/2009

    Thanks for sharing.

  • Sheri Fresonke Harper5/3/2009

    Hmm, interesting bit of wisdom :)Sheri

  • J L Carey Jr4/29/2009

    Good poem. It has a bit a Poe-ish feel to it.

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