A Dark Feeling

Mandy Kaye
A dark feeling is looming in the distance
Omniscient threats haunt my futile existence
Uncertainties muddle the air I breathe
I gasp, I choke, I reach in search for any answer

Omniscient threats haunt my futile existence
Paralyzing thoughts stun my throbbing corpse
I gasp, I choke, I reach in search for any answer
Trapdoors close heavy on hope

Paralyzing thoughts stun my throbbing corpse
Eternally held captive by my devious mind
Trapdoors close heavy on hope
Forcing forget on a future of fortune

A dark feeling is looming in the distance
Eternally held captive by my devious mind
Forcing forget on a future of fortune
Uncertainties muddle the air I breathe

Published by Mandy Kaye

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  • cathiesbloggs11/27/2007

    WOW..you are a very talented poet!!

  • foggynotion11/15/2007

    the piece is very nice. i love the dark imagery. but the last line of the poem should be the same as the first line. the poem should go in a circle. this piece however can stand on its own.

  • Mike Sutherland11/15/2007

    I'm starting to get the picture of just how to do one of these pantoum poems; Nicely done!

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