A Dark Shakespearean Sonnet: Black Rose

Rebecca Bardelli
A dark Shakespearean sonnet revealing a melancholy mood. Mostly in iambic pentameter, keeping in mind Shakespeare himself sometimes used two stressed syllables or trochaic pentameter.

Black Rose

I need a blackened rose to fit my mood,

A melancholy azure diamond ring,

My eyes are dripping, sad, and crimson hued,

To freeze the time, my wish to stop aging.


Confused by life and death, I chase the wind,

Frustrated with mistrust of them, of me,

A universe so full of evil sin,

So somber, full of cinders, hard to see.


Discouraging and gloomy clouds embrace,

The lightning flashes without ceasing once,

A murky swan not white, not full of grace,

To seek, to find, to need a temperance.


Despondently exposing heart and soul,

I feel enclosed inside a gloomy hole.


For a dark villanelle read: Garden Thorns of Emerlad

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  • Hajar Mulder1/31/2012

    Very beautiful sonnet. Thanks.

  • David Davis8/18/2011

    Nice job on this. :)

  • Mindy Mai8/12/2011

    Great Sonnet!

  • Sarah Shepherd8/11/2011

    Beautiful!

  • rama devi (Nina Marshall)8/11/2011

    Powerful and well penned. Indeed, a dark beauty! ;-)

  • Trisha Hodges8/10/2011

    It's dark, but I love it.

  • Timetraveler28/10/2011

    Beautifully done. As a senior citizen, I can identify with the thoughts. Getting old is not fun!

  • Davida Chazan8/10/2011

    Now that really is a dark sonnet. What's more, the meter is almost perfect. Brava!

  • E. L. D.8/9/2011

    Really very good, I thoroughly enjoyed it. (and thank you :)

  • Kitty Stevens8/8/2011

    It is dark, but so in the moment. Excellent work.

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