Each crime seemed to be a little more serious. He had been abused as a boy and the rage that he felt boiled beneath the surface of his skin. When that disgusting creep tried to come on to him, he lost it and beat him nearly to death. So Louie sat in a cell with men above him and men below him in tiers like in a honeycomb. The noise was nearly deafening at times. He sometimes thought that he would lose his mind. They could talk back and forth and it was a life that he would never adjust to but had to endure. He could only count the years, months and days until he was free, if he lived that long.
It was worse when they were on lock-down. Some idiot stabbed a guard and now everyone was locked in their cells for months at a time. No phone calls, meals, if you want to call them that, in your cell and endless hours of mind numbing boredom and horror. The claustrophobia could make a man nearly crawl the walls, if there were any.
A guy above him hung himself and he could understand why. He still wanted to live though. His mother had sent him some Narcotics Anonymous stuff in the past and he actually started to read it. If he were to ever get out of here, he had to change. You didn't dare think about the things that were in here that you couldn't escape from. Imagine you are in a house that has spirits in it. You can move. If you have a room in your house or apartment you can run away from it. Here there is no escape. That was why they couldn't even speak of the horror that haunted them here.
Joey whispered, "Hey Louie, did you see it? "
"Yes, just shut up!" Louie called back.
"That shadow, it's back, didn't you see it? There is no one up here but us. It wasn't a guard. Didn't you feel the temperature drop?
"Yes, but don't talk about it. There is no escape for us." Louie said. I can beat anything human, but not a demon."
The air grew foul. They could feel the oppressive stench of death and evil. Was it a long dead inmate? There was no escape. All they could do was to sit in horror as they felt the presence of unspeakable evil. Sitting in their cells, everything got deathly quiet. They all felt it. Louie could hear the beginnings of helpless sobbing as a young guy in the cell below started begging and quietly sobbing for mercy. They all could hear the guttural grunts and groans of unspeakable acts that were being done to Jeff.
He was just a young kid and no one could help him. Some of them had already hurt him. But even they wouldn't want to cross the demonic presence that had them all trapped in this prison. The lights dimmed and they sat in almost total darkness. Each man could hear others quietly starting to whisper the Lord's Prayer. That was the only way that they could make the unholy presence stop. Even those who didn't believe would start praying when the demon would come back. Who knew who it would attack next.
Slowly the muted sounds in a cell below began to lesson. The lights began to glow brighter. Even though they all hated the constant light, it was a blessed relief to have it back on again.
If I ever get out of here, Louie thought there is no way I am ever coming back. He wasn't the only one. Prison was hell, but living in a prison cell with a demon was worse than hell.
Published by Shana Dines
Shana is an award winning artist. Her specialty is pastel portraits and watercolors. She has illustrated a children's book and has written and illustrated one now in publishing. She is a Christian but believ... View profile
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10 Comments
Post a CommentThis is based loosely on a true story. My son many of you know is in prison, soon to be out. That will give me a lot to write about, which is really scary. He said that they don't talk about it, because there is no where for them to get away from spirits or anything else. He said that they have seen shadows and things that there is no explanation for. I can't think of much more terrifying.
The WOMEN are writing more gruesome stories than the men! Good job.
Oh great! Now I'm going to have nightmares....thanks a lot Shana. Lol..just kidding. Great piece!
That would be awful not to be able to go anywhere. Scary.
Oh, my! Yikes... this is really creepy!
Creepy!
Scary, cheers for the chills!
Well done, Shana!
That is really creepy!
spooky!!!