A Love Gone Wrong
September 21, 2009
A twisted riddle
Stared back at me in the mirror
My tears fallen upon empty emotions
No one hears my heartfelt cries of desperation
Longing for the nightmare of loneliness
To dissipate and return with thunderous
Sounds of happiness and triumph
Elation has progressively slid through the fingers of time
Taking with it the will to survive
Leaving a vacuous void of a heathen nature
Raping the dignity of adoration
And love resolved
Why has your heart betrayed me so
Where is the devotion that your eyes promised
Is the complexity of opening your heart
Revealing a significant discrepancy in your soul
A rip in the timeline of natures' course
Flowers wilting with the sentimental passion
Writhing from a deep seated pain
Discovering only solitary confinement
Because the emptiness overshadowed any good
Dying from abandonment of a love gone wrong
Published by Victoria Dawson
Single mom w/4 kids, work fulltime, college fulltime, love to write, very creative mind. View profile
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25 Comments
Post a CommentVery touching.
I was floored at this. Touched me very deeply, & from all the comments you got, I'm not the only one. You most certainly are gifted at this my friend. Wow...very, very nice. : - )
As a songwriter composer, I appreciate the essence of poetry. You've done a fine work here. Make sure it's copyrighted! ;)
Terrific :)
Beautiful. This is very deep and also positively great.
This is exceptionally wonderful work.
This piece is viscerally wrenching....
I think this is absolutely great writing, Victoria! Thanks a lot!
I could feel the pain of your words. Great writing.
Wow. This exudes powerful heartfelt emotions.