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  • Wayne Cook2/13/2009

    Thanks for the comments...the "quite destructive" line is meant to be "cute" since romantic love tends to "drive us crazy"

  • JAMES DALE VALENTINE2/12/2009

    hmmm... your "quite destructive" line throws me a bit - could it be that when love becomes that, it is no longer love? :) I like the poem, because its simplicity lends to a reading that leaves you a little out of breath... good stuff!

  • Lucky M. Diaz1/30/2009

    Great flow and imagery!

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