A Poem - Almost Goodbye

TiffanieC
Suffocating,
leave me alone
give me time to think

Paralyzed,
this is a disaster
I am on the brink

Spoken,
words you've said
that you can't take back

Shivering,
I am frozen
from the empathy you lack

Distorted,
everything's twisted
will you ever see things clear?

Gone,
that's where I'll be
watch me disappear

Published by TiffanieC

I am the wife to a wonderful man and a long distance caregiver to my amazing mom! My mom suffered a massive stroke in early 2007 at the age of 54 and has a long road of recovery in front of her. I run my own...  View profile

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  • Wiley Vaughn5/24/2010

    Already gone!

  • Kate9/24/2008

    Great poem. I love how you started each stanza with a verb to draw the reader in. And I can totally relate to the subject, unfortunately.

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