A Short Story - Help Came Too Late
Listen to Those in Pain and Help Friends in Need Before it is Too Late
Where did she go wrong. She had thought about it for days, weeks and years. Somehow her mind seems to have taken a turn in the wrong direction. She was lost in a maze of decisions that appeared to be headed down the right path. She awoke one morning and screamed out-loud - no one was here - It was a mistake!! she yelled, and she wept - the tears slowly falling down her cheeks and then came down like a torrential rainstorm. Her face was wet and she was soaked in sweat.
She made one little mistake. She sobbed. She continued to weep until she could no longer breathe. She sat there for what seemed like hours - until her tears subsided, her breathe returned to normal and still she sat, as if in a trance, and stared out the window. It was too late now, she thought-and then she took the gun and shot herself in the head.
Her friends mourned when the news came out that she had died. They felt remorse when they learned that she had killed herself. They had not known the pain she felt; the loneliness she had endured or the mistake she had made that had haunted her and brought her to this final decision. No one had known or truly cared to know. They were friends and should have, but they turned their back on her when she tried to explain.
If only someone had taken the time to look at her and truly listen she might still be alive today. Each had their own life to live and ignored the look of anguish on her face each time they met.
They dressed in black and attended her funeral. They mourned and they wept. They each took turns speaking about her and how great a friend she had been. They all said if only she had said something to them they might have saved her life. However, at the time, none of them knew how deep the pain went since none took the time to listen or to truly care.
They were her friends. They were her family. They turned their back on her, and today they all came to bury her. Tomorrow, they will continue to go on with their lives and soon she will be only a memory.
So sad, if only one of them had taken the time to 'listen' and hear her cry for help - she still might be alive today.
The problem with the world today is that each person is so wrapped up in their own lives they have no time to recognize the cry for help or the pain and anguish that someone close to them is feeling.
Published by Sondra C
Brooklyn born Sondra Crane is a youthful looking and acting senior. She began writing as a child and never stopped. Her blog, "Along Life's Path" includes life as it was then and a glimpse into her thoughts... View profile
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22 Comments
Post a CommentVery Powerful, I enjoyed reading this. It is sometimes so hard for people to go on when they feel they have no one, so sad.
Great work! Happy Holidays =0)
Thanks so much for your comment on my article. Thought I'd drop by and return the favor. This story is sad, especially because it's based in real life. You're so right...we go about our lives with blinders on. We often wear them on purpose and fail to see the more important details that don't happen to be on our to-do lists.
Great points. Sorry you have not been receiving notifications. I was not receiving them for awhile too. It took some time to get it straight.
Very sad story -- yet even in tragedy we know God makes it all work together for good for those who love Him, and want to live for Him. Well written!
It's so true, each of us is so busy, sometimes we don't even notice - or, if we do we might say to ourselves I'll call tomorrow. Tomorrow might be too late! Thank you for reminding all of us that we could always do more, it might just save someone's life! Extremely well written. So sad.
I agree deeply with Paul, you really find out who your friends are when you are in need.
Beautifully written. That's how I've felt in recent months. When life is tough you REALLY find out who your friends are.
This is a powerful story, it will linger in my mind a long time to come...well written and a lesson to learn also. Thank you!
WOW!!!