Alpha State

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An angel came to see me

When I was in an alpha state

And I knew it was you

Because we hugged tightly

In an alpha state

I saw your face

And we hugged tightly

The earth stopped spinning

I saw you

And smelled your hair

The earth stopped spinning

Because your body is so soft

I smelled your hair

And I loved it so

Because your body is so soft

I didn't want it to end

And I loved it so

To get a taste of your lips

I didn't want it to end

Can you relate

To get a taste of your lips

And I knew it was you

That lonesome night

An angel came to see me.

Published by foggynotion

I am an aspiring writer, mired in the world of social work. I have dreams of becoming a published author someday. I decided to start my own production because every writing job interview that I have had di...  View profile

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  • Kady Burney12/15/2007

    what a great poem!
    I love your work!

  • Linda Ann Nickerson11/16/2007

    Nicely done. Based on comments you have received on your other poems, you might do well to write an AC article on How to Craft a Pantoum. Folks are asking, after seeing your work, and you could do this well! Just a suggestion. . . . ;-)

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