Am I a Fool?

Virginia Gaces
Am I a fool to think that someday,

the vestige of the fiery thoughts

I have for you; and the deluge of words

that assails my senses, would course

through your veins and flood you

with wanton and exquisite pleasure;

until you have no option but to succumb,

to the eagerness and frenzy movement

of my fingers; a welcome acceptance

of my rambling mind.

Am I a fool to wish that someday,

One touch from me would make you

yearn for the succeeding taps,

I hope you'll be as eager as my hands

and mind are, for I can't live without you-

forging a written transformation of my thoughts.

Published by Virginia Gaces

I am an allied health professional who is also an academician. I have an interest in writing and had some works published in a few local magazines. I am writing my first novel and hope to be able to p...  View profile

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  • Virginia Gaces5/1/2009

    Hi Zorlone,

    Even your comments are lyrical as a poem now. You catch up very quickly, Yes, in this case a writer without her keypad/computer. Thanks.

  • Zorlone4/30/2009

    Aha! An artist who misses his paint, a writer without a computer, a swordsman without a sword... Very lovely poem. So deliberately humble yet it appealed to the senses like a pin on a balloon.

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