An Ode to My Laptop!
Poetry Challenge of the Day!
Now I have you all to myself
You are all mine, you I will not swap
I knew from the moment I noticed you upon the shelf
Oh laptop, my laptop
As my fingers caressed your keys
I wanted you from that first moment in that shop
You said to me, take me home, yes please
Oh laptop, my laptop
It was wrong of me I know
I wanted you upon my desktop
But I just didn't have the dough
Oh laptop, my laptop
I rushed off to get some finance
The bank said no, we were for the chop
Would we become a victim of circumstance?
Oh laptop, my laptop
One last try for me to get credit
Am I now for the chop
Should I continue? Just press edit
Published by John Smither
I had often felt that I had a book inside me ready to be written (many of us have I know), well it has been but now I need to get it published. Until recently I never knew I could write poems, that is my nex... View profile
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12 Comments
Post a CommentVery funny and clever!
I hear ya, John. And I enjoyed your nod to Walt Whitman. Certainly no sillier than the love poem to my toaster! ; )
Very cute! :)
Quite humorous.Well done.
Nice. It's far better if you don't hate your laptop, the way I do.
Cute...who doesn't love their computer?
Nice :-)
Love it! :-)
Got a chuckle out of this one! (^;^)
Very cute :)