An Ode to Technology, National Poetry Month: Poetry Challenge of the Day

The Man Killer

J L Carey Jr
There's a grim lore
That haunts the plant
About a drunker's death
On the C-1 Line.
No one deserves it - - they tell,
But he was in the wrong place.

20,000 lbs. can,
Well - - change a man,
Respectfully,
Into whatever it deems fit.
In this case
The hood of a Chevy.

Flecks of bone, jellied flesh
And that - - gray matter,
Which had went
Momentarily unused,
Found itself
Tightly compressed in the die.

What drove him into - -
That open mouth of solid steel?
Two finely tooled jaws
Engineered
To sheer and spit
A million clones out the other end.

Surely - - he'd gone in
A hundred times before,
Support bars
Resting on the column post,
Safety-lock
Dangling from his jeans,

Tempting Newton and Murphy,
Pushing their buttons,
Provoking them
To finally exercise their laws
With a thunderous clap
And - - a moment of silence.

Operator error - - they tell,
His memory stamped
Repeatedly
Into Unionized nerves,
For the Man Killer
Still shakes the floor.

Published by J L Carey Jr

J L Carey Jr, Author of the book Turning Pages, is a writer and an artist living in Michigan with his wife and three children. He holds an MFA in Creative Writing from National University and a BA in Englis...  View profile

A die and a press are used in the automotive industry to stamp out the pieces used to build our cars. Many of the workers in the plants have lost fingers or limbs in the die press and occasionally someone is killed.

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  • Tina Twito7/3/2009

    Wonderful! Reads like modern folklore. I love the line "Tempting Newton and Murphy,". Glad you liked "The Well"! Have a happy 4th!

  • mimpi5/13/2009

    Is that what modern poetry like! You have excelled in it!

  • Dawn Reavis5/7/2009

    Scary .. sounds like a monologue fit for a frightening blockbuster movie. Good job.

  • Ana Maria Alvarez5/1/2009

    awesome, chilling!

  • J L Carey Jr4/29/2009

    Is it just my computer or does the advertisement cover the text?

  • Paul Rance4/28/2009

    Like modern Poe poetry! Grimly compelling.

  • Tikuli Dogra4/27/2009

    what a wonderful creation .. wow I am speechless. gr8 going

  • Wendy Dawn4/27/2009

    OMG - vivid, horrific ode. But you nailed the ode part.

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