Analyzing a Poem

Kayla McClure
Poetry is a beautiful composition of words. The words of a poem have a way of speaking to a person's heart. A poem doesn't need to rhythm. Most poetry has a deeper connection beyond the written word. Not everyone views poetry in the same perspective. Poetry tells a story of some sort. Let's examine the following poem together.

"Poem"

"I am strong and capable. I can do whatever I set my mind to. I am filled with strength and confidence. I take one thing at a time in bite size pieces. I have the courage to decide what I will give and what I will not give. I create the time to do things which nourish me. I have the right to say "No" without feeling guilty. I deserve to be treated well. I have the courage to see my inner child as lovable. I am lovable. I give myself permission to ask for comfort and solace. I open myself to receive all good things. I have the courage to ask for help and emotional support. I love and forgive myself as I would a dear friend. I take time to be silent. I have the courage to live in the moment. I let go of feelings that are not mine. I use empowering words such as choose to, want to, and will. I am in charge of my mind. I allow myself to express my pain constructively. I have the right to my feelings, whatever they are. I have courage to allow others to take responsibility for themselves. I have the right to have limits. I trust myself. I value my thoughts."

By: Sue Patton Thoele, Women's book of courage

What is this poem speaking of in relation to the reader? "Poem" speaks closely to my heart. Why? I am a survivor of domestic violence. This poem is an inspiration to all women and men who have survived domestic abuse from a partner. Yes men too can be victims.

Poems such as these are powerful motivational speeches. It gives us the both for a better future. Most survivors have a broken spirit, from the tormenting abuse of a partner. The first sentence to examine is, "I am in charge of my mind." This sentence is a powerful statement to always put into action. You are in charge of yourself. But in an abusive relationship, you loose yourself and the control of your life and mind. No matter what the abuser says, you have control of you, and the other way around.

Poems with these empowering words gives victims the knowledge that hope still exists, and to never give up. This poem really speaks the truth on all levels. The analyzing of this poem has so many enduring qualities. Everyone deserves to be treated with love and respect. This poem gives those the courage and strength to empower themselves, and to not allow others to degrade them.

As a survivor of domestic abuse, this poem helped me to overcome the pain and memories of my abuse. I am in charge of my mind, and I am a strong and capable person. Hope isn't far away. Keep on believing.

Published by Kayla McClure

I am freelance writer who loves to write, and just be. I am a proud mother of a baby boy, Shane Austin. Motto: Everything happens for a reason...Let love find you...Not find love...  View profile

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