Angel (Why Did You Leave?)

Lisa R. Strong
I am writing you tonight;
To try to tell you how I feel;
I tried so hard to win this fight;
The loss of you has become too real;

I close my eyes and say a prayer;
I tried to shut you out of my mind;
Life has been so hard without you here;
Pain is all that you left behind;

I wish I had told you from the start;
I wish that you could be with me;
I feel the heavy weight of my heart;
Tell me, why did you have to leave?

Yet even now I know you are here;
I can feel you all around me;
A special guardian angel dear;
That is what I have come to believe;

Hold me close against the dark of night;
Until the dawn of the morning sun;
I will be better in the rays of light;
When the new day has just begun;

Published by Lisa R. Strong

I was born and raised in Binghamton NY. I have been writing short stories since I was eight years old, and poetry since I was a teenager. I also write prayers, meditations, and opinion articles. My dre...  View profile

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  • Charles Reynolds2/17/2008

    Beautifully done.

  • A.M. Morgan2/10/2008

    Well written. The picture speaks a thousand words.

  • Karen2/10/2008

    Dear Lisa, there is no answer to the tormenting question "Why?" That's the way the world works, that's all: storms assault the good and the bad alike. I'm sure your sister is embracing night and day from her now far remove, willing you to fell a renewal of courage and confidence even in your loss.

  • Mary E. Coe2/7/2008

    Beautiful. Enjoyed.

  • Justice Lives Not2/7/2008

    Very beautiful, Lisa. Whatever you are battling inside is producing some world-class poetry, and I pray for you every time I read! This is great work, I'm here to tell ya!

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA2/7/2008

    Veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. I am proud being your brother. What a beautiful picture poem you wrote. Great , superb, wonderful, cute, and all others good adjectives in the English dictionary must be applied for this poem. Thanks a lot.

  • Coffee Mugg2/7/2008

    beautiful Miss Lisa . ken

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