April 16, 2009 Challenge for Poetry Month: Cinquain

Mixed-up Month of March

Deonils
Cinqauin #1

March
teasing, pleasing
warming, freezing, raining
love ... flowers ready to explode
false spring


Cinquain #2 on Writing:

Poems
vital, tidal
thundering, wondering, daring
self-therapy through wordsmithing
word-dance

Published by Deonils

I became a teacher in South Africa; since then I have worked in government, schools and higher education. My small business utilises my teacher-training & adult literacy interests/skills.  View profile

  • two original cinquains with surprises in each that will be sure to bring smiles to your soul!
One of these is a Nature conquain; the other is about writing or a meta-poem

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  • scarface3/23/2010

    it is bad

  • 3lilangels4/18/2009

    You wouldn't even know there was a mistake, very beautiful!

  • Deonils4/16/2009

    Cathy and John - I confess I used this form (cinquain) as a teaching device for grammar. It's been years since I wrote my own. So I messed up lines 1 in each case (Should read MADNESS and POETRY, respectively). I am grateful for your encouraging words and visits. Thanks and Shalom

  • John Smither4/16/2009

    Great writing.

  • Cathy A Montville4/16/2009

    Terrific work here! Have a super day! :)

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