Are You Truely Alive?

For Artme's Poem "12 Rules for Being Human"

JaXx
Just a pinch to see if you feel
close the light from entering
dream's are just imaginary moments

Free yourself within your shell
allow the life you simply regret
awaken your senses

Live a life, be alive
see beyond your perceived limitations
endless soul you locked within

Empowered life placed upon window ledges
watching the world take flight
here for a moment with no regrets

Two questions one answer..
are you alive or simply living?

Published by JaXx

I hope you can feel the type of person I am without having to explain.. I am alive... That is my Biography... Love life.. Writing is passion.. Allowing your heart to speak.. Check out my other sites (curre...  View profile

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  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA5/10/2008

    This poem is 1) very amazing, 2) very nicely written, and 3) very perfectly done.

  • Kady the Hippie Woodstock5/8/2008

    I put you on my favorite list and your poetry is really amazing!

  • Kady the Hippie Woodstock5/8/2008

    This is amazing poetry and I am amazed!!!!Great job on this!!!!!!!

  • 3lilangels5/7/2008

    Great job on this poem!!!!!!!!

  • Coffee Mugg5/7/2008

    There are so many of us that do not know how to live so are just existing, and waiting for something to happen. I sometime feel that is where I am and at a standstill. Good Job Miss Jaxx ken

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