At Ease

Haiku in 3, 5, 3

Sharon Cohen
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boldness dash

or pomp and panache

ego drives

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Notes:

Sharon Cohen creates Haiku in non-traditional 3, 5, 3 pattern to practice the art of pithiness and to break writer's block. She also bends and breaks the rules for traditional Haiku, adapting them to her own design as follows:

Haiku do not tell stories and almost never involve people's actions. Haiku simply convey an abstract concept -- usually an emotion.

Haiku will generally present contrast. Creating these contrasts can be the hardest part. The Haiku poet wants a perfect catalyst to spark the right emotional note.

Haiku usually focus around imagery. Sharon Cohen's Haiku is often paired with a photograph from which the Haiku is inspired.

Challenge for the Reader:

Relating to the photograph provided, the reader is challenged to submit their own Haiku of any style and pattern, in the comments section below.

Published by Sharon Cohen

Having dabbled in multiple careers and innumerable hobbies, I have finally realized that my greatest earthly endeavor is that of being a wife. I am an helpmeet - from the Hebrew work "ezer" - meaning to sur...  View profile

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  • Hearten Soul3/30/2007

    Brett - I like your style!

  • brett brady3/30/2007

    bar & grill -
    not one bike has moved
    this whole weekend

    -brett brady

  • Angie Shiflett2/26/2007

    Very cool - thanks for sharing!

  • SHARON COHEN1/30/2007

    Alisha Michelle - That is one HOT Haiku!

  • Donna1/29/2007

    Freedom soon - Take a chance - Risk it all (Hey, this is fun, Sharon, thanks)

  • SHARON COHEN1/29/2007

    Alisha - yours is awesome! I can just hear "love machine" repeating itself in my head all day! LOL - thanks!

  • Alisha Wilson1/29/2007

    Oops. Here it is. chrome and steele; motorcycle man; love machine

  • Alisha Wilson1/29/2007

    chrome and steele
    motorcycle man
    love machine

    Here's my go at it! Hey, Sharon, this was fun! :)

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