Awkward Dancer Haiku

Steven West
She has two left feet
Can we please sit this one out?
My feet want to shout

Her hips are shaking
But her feet are stuck in mud
And they won't come out

She is beautiful
She walks like a graceful swan
Dances like a duck

Published by Steven West

I have a passion for creative writing and political discourse. Happily married for over 24 years, I have 2 children and work with special needs kids in the public schools. I enjoy making people laugh and sm...   View profile

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  • John Myers 8/1/2010

    Funny!

  • JulieW 7/31/2010

    funny

  • Janet Hunt 7/31/2010

    I didn't know you were watching me dance... :-)

  • Harriet Steinberg 7/30/2010

    I love that second haiku

  • April Lorier, Author and Encourager 7/30/2010

    I love watching ducks walk! Used to take my 3 kids to Santa Barbara just to feed the ducks and interact with them.

  • Maria Roth 7/30/2010

    Haha!

  • Peter Flom 7/30/2010

    Hehe. Usually people who walk gracefully dance gracefully, but I guess there are exceptions. Me? I don't do anything gracefully

  • Delicia Powers 7/30/2010

    I L0VE your Haiku, it is fun sublimely done:0)

  • Debbie Gavazzi 7/30/2010

    Sounds like you have a problem there. Don't go out dancing next time.... take in dinner and a movie, instead. lol ;)

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