Beautiful
Cautious creature
Are you alive?
Your breathing has increased to hard...
Beautiful
Did I already mention this?
I feel ashamed
Why do you stare at me that way?
Do you feel ashamed, too?
Don't...
It's not your fault
You're caught up in this,
This beautiful paradise...
Your eyes should not
Know this place
It's so hard here to stay alive
So hard to find your place
Beautiful
I fear I've done it again
I'm sorry
You won't hear that from
Anyone else here...
Here...
In this place that we
All dread...
Sometimes, I wonder...
If they would even cry
If I were dead...
Here...
In this beautiful paradise...
Cautious creature
Are you alive?
Your breathing has increased to hard...
Beautiful
Did I already mention this?
I feel ashamed
Why do you stare at me that way?
Do you feel ashamed, too?
Don't...
It's not your fault
You're caught up in this,
This beautiful paradise...
Your eyes should not
Know this place
It's so hard here to stay alive
So hard to find your place
Beautiful
I fear I've done it again
I'm sorry
You won't hear that from
Anyone else here...
Here...
In this place that we
All dread...
Sometimes, I wonder...
If they would even cry
If I were dead...
Here...
In this beautiful paradise...
Published by RCRyder
New father as of 10/4/2010. I have loved writing since the 8th grade. Early writings show promise, but very childish. I have written over ten thousand lyrics/poems. I also write many how to articles on fishi... View profile
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Post a CommentVery neat work.