Bitterness

Don't Give in to This

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Sometimes, I am bitter
like a crabapple....

Only, it consumes me
becomes a part of my heart....

Twin to a serpent !
It knows evil and only ends where it begins....

only outcome is decay....

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Learning and Reading are a Passion ! My Spiritual Faith is very important to me.. Oh yeah, I do like to write poetry from time to time..  View profile

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  • Kid-Romeo9/1/2009

    short and sweet good job

  • M. Eileen Burston11/7/2008

    hi. i came back to read this. it is so thought provoking.

  • Mike Gilchrist8/10/2008

    Fan-tas-tic this was short ans to the point. Thanks for sharing this with all of us.
    Please feel free to read all of my postings that i have and heaven forbid don't be afraid to comment. that Is how I know if I am doing a good job or not . :)

  • Restaurant Chef7/2/2008

    This is so true great work!

  • M. Eileen Burston6/14/2008

    you gave such an accurate description of what bitterness is. and, you did it in so few words. that is commendable. i know, from personal experience. thanks for sharing your gift.

  • Karen Chaffee6/12/2008

    "bitter like a crabapple." I've tasted them. Ewww. The poem is what I, too, have found to be true. Holding onto bitterness is a lot like swallowing acid. It corrodes us on the inside. You've spoken a lot of wisdom in just a few choice words. Kudos!

  • Mary Lynn 3215/7/2008

    So very true. Hugs Mary

  • Baconator4/27/2008

    Loved the comparison! Great job!

  • Harold Sink4/22/2008

    Short and sweet. Nice.

  • Michele Martinez4/21/2008

    Great poem. I would add that it kills relationships instead of reconciles them.

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