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  • Harry Gunawan12/12/2007

    Hmm.. I never thought of that one before. I'm afraid by putting these together and add a new one might change the whole meaning (in a way that I might not intend to). I'm indeed using number as part of these poems' title but it doesn't mean it represents the continuation of the whole. I hope you are not misguided. But I will consider your suggestion. Who knows what will happen if "Bleu 3" is born. :) Anyway, your opinion has shifted my perception positively. And I love how you named poem as a child! All of sudden, I sensed that all of my poems have personalities. Talk about caring and nurturing these children, phew.. :D It is a blessing indeed to be creative. Thanks Kady! ^_^

  • Kady Burney12/12/2007

    I like this one too. Oh please put bleu one and blue two together and bleu 3 could be their beautiful love child called a poem! You write so well!

  • Harry Gunawan12/12/2007

    I'm glad to know there is someone who shares the same vision! Our body may be aging but not our soul or spirit. :D

  • Justice Lives Not12/11/2007

    VERY NICE! It invokes the feeling I used to get when I was abourd ship on a midnight watch. Nothing but NOTHING compares to a midnight sky in the middle of the sea with no light polution. I never realized there were so many stars!

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