Bliss in My Mind-Body

Poem

Kady Birdwhistle
I digress today
My bliss is mind-body
Sufficient and enlightened
Nothing is forced
The suffering and decay disappears
To give-breathe new life
The Earth can be seen as graveyards
I do not see see this-way see see me me
The protection of life grants
Only for a short while
SO I breathe and LAUGH and sing and SWING my toes upon the PLAYGROUND
Because my father, Coy Eugene gave me the beating heart to PLAY
He is my DNA and this will never pass away
I digress today
Mercy is the wheel of LOVE
It is our job to propel it so
Come forth Heaven and Eternity
The love of all you shall find
Inside those eyes of poets, inside those writer-minds
The mourning of outcasts will dash away
Those living at the lowest depths
We show them GOODWILL because we are poets and we FEEL
The life of eternal eye-blinks and heartbeats
SO I breathe and I hear the jiggling winds coming in my Columbia home
The ideas of people racing and rearing their babies
Makes me smile
I digress today
The solution is to simply come and feel the home fires
Paths of concentration are the elite, yet not snobbish
Treasure the aspect of things and give proper respect
For all we really have in the LIFE is each other
Just like the Palmyra tree I spring into this world
Fading out and fading into life's shadow-dance
The spring is the beauty of future-LAND, for we all UNITE
Forevermore

This was written tonight and I love you all for all of your support. Someone called my poem, "Hello I am Dork" (which was not a poem by the way a piece of trash and the person described themselves anonymously as "Tired" as their avatar or handle) a piece of trash. I understand that AC is not an online blog and sometimes I use it as my little diary as my life unfolds. Even though the comment hurt me deeply, I will try to write more as I know that I can! I love you all and thankyou for your support!!!! You are all my angels!!!!!

Published by Kady Birdwhistle

I am a woman seeking to learn more about different writing communities while pursuing my college education. I am currently obsessed with freelance writing, Charlaine Harris (author), yoga,Christianity, Hindu...  View profile

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  • Alban Mehling ;-}}>5/28/2008

    Your talent is far beyond the nonsense that is said to you. Thank you fer sharin'. Mizpah. ;-}}>

  • Lisa Riggs5/25/2008

    Love you Kady!!!!!! Don't let mean spirtied people make you sad.....you are surrounded by love and support on AC!!! xoxoxoxoxo

  • Charles Reynolds5/25/2008

    Kady, you keep going. You are part of what AC is doing for literature of all kinds, even if they don't know it. Yes, AC is not an online blog, but it is looking for original content, which your slice of life writing (be it poetry or otherwise) is real, insightful and original. So you ignore those who don't understand. Because of their ignorance, they never will.

  • 3lilangels5/25/2008

    I loved this, and really hope you feel better, I am just getting better now man it was horrible, my prayers are with you and hope you have a quick recovery, love and hugs!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Christine Bruness5/24/2008

    Never loose sight of your goals as a writer and human being. Stay centered.

  • Nikki5/24/2008

    you keep being your same sweet genuine self ... don't pay attention to mean people ... i hope whoever it was that wrote the mean things finds God and goodness and light :D

  • Donna Thacker5/24/2008

    Unfortunatly, people can be very mean sometimes, Kady. You just keep on writing so your MANY fans can keep on reading.

  • Chelle5/24/2008

    great work :) usually it's a sign of success when people start being mean to you, lol.

  • Nancie Norton5/24/2008

    As I said before, some people aren't happy if they are not making others unhappy....a sad way to live!
    You just keep writing those Kadylines, for all of us who enjoy reading them, Poet Kady! Let no one tell you that you are not as good as you think you are....That's what it takes to be better than the rest....That belief in yourself! YOU GO GIRL!!! ...And like the energizer bunny.....
    Keep Going, and Going, and Going+*+*+* PEACE... to the unhappy one.

  • cathiesbloggs5/24/2008

    You have people that are cowards..to go and "hide" and write something to hurt someone...you are a precious person Kady..don't let someone like that get you down..I have had people write mean things on mine too but I just push it aside and go on...the real question is ..why do they have to hide?...

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