Break Up Poem
I lost myself in a puddle
Mesmerized by every ring
Staring at the concentric circles
Colliding.
Mesmerized by every ring
Staring at the concentric circles
Colliding.
I stare at my reflection
watching it wriggle and shake
I drop in a pebble
and watch the image break.
That pebble was you.
Slowly though, the water stills
I see myself again
Calm.
The ripples fade out of view
The pebble is under water
No more thoughts of you.
Published by Kay Raisy
I live in Alaska and love the snow and beauty all around. I have been married for 19 years and have two teen aged sons. I love to write poetry, draw, paint, and do anything crafty. I recently turned in my... View profile
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2 Comments
Post a CommentWell put, I like it!
This is wonderfully written and exudes plenty of emotion.