Broken

Kay Raisy
I'm broken
My body ebbs with pain
Never ceasing
Never tame

I want to be whole again
And do my part
Help shoulder the burden
That I helped start

From where I sit
I see things undone
I'm taunted, haunted
By things undone

I pray for relief
I long to break free
Let me out of this prison
that no one can see

I'm broken
Wondering why
Please dear God
Hear my cry

Published by Kay Raisy

I live in Alaska and love the snow and beauty all around. I have been married for 19 years and have two teen aged sons. I love to write poetry, draw, paint, and do anything crafty. I recently turned in my...   View profile

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  • Missy H. 2/5/2011

    very well written

  • Missy H. 5/20/2010

    Well written poem :)

  • george chavez 3/24/2010

    Well written. You are a talented writer. Please keep it up as you can see others enjoy your thoughts, musings, emotions. I would say this tends to mean you are a WRITER, something to be proud of as not too many people can claim that title.

  • Violet Rose 3/7/2010

    Emotionally moving poem - love it!

  • Janice Hinds 3/2/2010

    Very nice, short and sweet.

  • Marie Lowe 2/20/2010

    I like it.

  • D. Marie 2/18/2010

    This speaks volumes for the feelings of those who are disabled, or otherwise broken. Powerful and moving.

  • Sandy James 2/17/2010

    Very moving.

  • R.C. Johnson 2/14/2010

    Words well chosen and a poem that is very expressive.

  • kath huertas 2/12/2010

    this is something God wanted to see in us, that we acknowledge our brokenness and ask God to make us whole again... great... :)

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