Canvas Blue Palette

Jolynne M Hudnell
she enjoys
the fronds
in the lake
as the currants
wash over her
bits and pieces
gingersnap
toes the line
the colorful display
of fresh canvas
the palette
prefers the
taste of blue
over white
as he is board


part ii

space away
do your
fingers click?
mesmerize me
is it dark
in the deep
of the moon?
ah, perhaps
the humor missed
in spatial palates


Published by Jolynne M Hudnell

Jolynne is a part-time freelance writer and independently-published poet. Jolynne has knowledge and experience in a variety of topics. Jolynne enjoys singing and writing poetry. Her published work in...  View profile

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  • rama devi nina5/24/2011

    Excellent poem. :)

  • Jeanne Baney5/19/2011

    Very tranquil feel to this piece. Lovely.

  • Jack Wellman5/18/2011

    Absolutely artistic that is off the canvas in beauty, splendor, and in meaning. Extraordinary talent my friend. of which I wished I had o1/10th of such. Thank you. Such beautiful imagery that is beyond description.

  • Mandy Robinson5/18/2011

    Great job!

  • Don Rothra5/18/2011

    Nice work.

  • Laura Cone5/18/2011

    great job

  • rmharrington5/18/2011

    What thought provoking imagry. "Mesmerize" has always been one of my favorite words. It seems to say so much more than the definition relays.

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