Cars and Trucks: Vehicle Rating and the Hierarchy

Analogy Poem

Ranee Wright
Cars and Trucks: An Analogy Poem

Cars that are showcased
Sheltered and polished -
Spoiled

Trucks that are lifted
Constructed and gifted -
Empowered

Cars and trucks that are cruised
Appraised and reused -
Exalted

Trucks that are rugged
Weathered and strutted -
Toiled

Cars that are pro-raced
Dented and disgraced -
Soured

Cars and trucks that are abused
Neglected and bruised -
Exhausted

The vehicle rating led to a revolt
Exhaust, Sour and Toil seek fault

Disgusted with inequity, they consult
Spoil, Empower and Exalt

The crux - it is the parts dealt and how the parts are driven
Hierarchy even applies to trucks and cars.

Some of the disgusted vehicles stayed
Others fled and the rest thanked their lucky stars.

Published by Ranee Wright

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  • Wiley Vaughn4/22/2010

    Good stuff!

  • Christopher Mathew Burt3/17/2010

    I really liked it!

  • Tony Payne3/17/2010

    Nicely done.

  • Julie Darleen3/17/2010

    Interesting analogies can be made from this delightful poem

  • Abby Greenhill3/17/2010

    we finally sold the elCamino - now someone else can live with it! That thing was spoliled!

  • JerseyNana3/17/2010

    Very cute analogy! My blue baby is now all mine after 66 months of payments! Hope it remains Spoiled for at least 66 more months!!!

  • Michele Starkey3/17/2010

    I never thought about it this way before! Cheers ;)

  • Robert Sylvus3/17/2010

    My truck is Empowered and Toiled.
    I wish it was spoiled.
    It is neither soured nor exhausted,
    but to me it is Exalted.

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