Her sister was suspended above her by meat hooks through her arms, legs and the skin on her back. Her hair was tied in a knot over another hook to hold her head up. Her fear-stricken gaze was locked with Charlottes. Charlotte couldn't close her eyes until her sister shut hers.
The sisters could not talk with their lips sewn shut, so they spoke to each other with their eyes. Charlotte watched the light dim in her sister's green gaze. She knew a person could not last long after losing so much blood.
Unwillingly, she thought back to the moment she woke up and saw the man slice her sister open, reach inside and pull the baby out. She knew he had waited for her to wake up because the bastard smiled right before cutting her sister open. She thought sheer terror was the only thing that kept her sister from passing out.
The squeak of a rusty hinge from the man opening the door snapped Charlotte back to the present in time to hear her sister release a heavy sigh and shut her eyes. As the man pressed the blade of his knife against her stomach, one last tear fell from her sister's lashes and dripped onto Charlotte's cheek. Offering a silent prayer, Charlotte closed her eyes.
Published by Angel Sharum
Angel Sharum is a freelance writer of both fiction and non-fiction. She writes articles on a number of topics ranging from self-help to hiking and has numerous works of fiction published in print anthologies... View profile
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14 Comments
Post a CommentHoly cow! This is very descriptive, capturing moments of pure terror and evil. Wow. Good writing here.
great job! hugz cj
Woah, that's intense!!
Thanks, y'all. I try!
I feel like I'm watching CSI, NCIS, or Criminal Minds. Very graphic and very engaging.
Wow, Angel, these are graphic images. Excellent writing!
LOL, just hope you never end up in her perdicament!
Like the character's name (ha!)
I send stuff out to places all the time. I got a twitter thing accepted by Outshine the other day.
I hope you are saving some of these to publish....