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  • K. Ray2/7/2008

    How beautiful! My nickname is Blue Crystal Sky. Great haiku!

  • Harry Gunawan1/15/2008

    Such elegant finishing!!! Great one K.Jai! By the way, after reading this over and over again, I'm wondering who is looking who. :-D

  • Lisa Renee.1/9/2008

    Whoa! Lovely haiku with an awesomely beautiful photo!

  • Kady and Tony Burney1/9/2008

    WOWEEEE YES!!!!!! Oh my goodness, yes!!!! This is what I've been waiting for!!!!!! Your last line is so powerful, I mean the whole poem is powerful, but that last line, "Changing forms look down!!!!!!" YESSSS!!!!! You've really got it!

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