Cloudy Haiku

Deonils
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patched sky ... golden threads

expose summer gone by - fall

skies wear snowcapes now

Published by Deonils

I became a teacher in South Africa; since then I have worked in government, schools and higher education. My small business utilises my teacher-training & adult literacy interests/skills.  View profile

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  • Tina Twito10/9/2009

    Really captures this "season between seasons".

  • Jedley Manimtim10/7/2009

    This is great! I agree with Kristie!

  • Kristie Leong M.D.10/5/2009

    Awesome work. I can feel the change in season when I read this haiku. :-)

  • John Smither10/2/2009

    Nice weather related haiku.

  • Linda Louise Johnson9/30/2009

    Lovely golden days!

  • Tony Vega9/30/2009

    love the golden threads

  • Memmay Moore9/30/2009

    70 degrees this AM in Florida....nice.

  • Roberta Baxter9/30/2009

    Even your cloudy Haiku is a nice one.TX

  • W. A. Swan9/30/2009

    you forecast the weather here better than the weatherlady did :) Nice poem

  • Abby Greenhill9/30/2009

    no no no snow...mountains are clear and beautiful! Thanks Neil for another fine haiku!

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