Come on to My House Part Two

Come On

Kady Birdwhistle
Come on to my house
Let's play some baseball
I've got a great tree to climb
Burn a little incense while
Tony cooks some eggs
I'll get out the little guitar
She sings so sweet
Come onto my house
Family photos galore
If I could get ahold of Uncle BH's banjo
We'd rock out tonight
If not, you can have the remote control
If Daffodil does not hide it

Published by Kady Birdwhistle

I am a woman seeking to learn more about different writing communities while pursuing my college education. I am currently obsessed with freelance writing, Charlaine Harris (author), yoga,Christianity, Hindu...  View profile

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  • Charles B Reynolds11/12/2008

    Great invite!

  • Louisa3644/10/2008

    very sweet! I love it.

  • Pure Writing4/7/2008

    Very good inviting poem.good write.laterz.

  • Tye Martin4/7/2008

    Sounds like a good time to me....thanks for the invite...see you soon!

  • jcorn4/7/2008

    And when I come over I am going to talk to that Daffodil about the pros and cons of hiding remote controls, lol.

  • jcorn4/7/2008

    I love that last line "If Daffodil does not hide it" (about the remote control) That last line made it uniquely YOUR poem :) and very cute and funny.

  • Kim Linton4/7/2008

    So cute!

  • Sonya Covert4/7/2008

    ok, me and all my kids will be right over..ha

  • Coffee Mugg4/7/2008

    did i comment on this one .......... lol. good job miss kadyken

  • Mary E. Coe4/6/2008

    Very beautiful photo.

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