Communism Poem????

Poem

Kady Birdwhistle
Mr. Coffee wants a Communism poem from me
Rather an article, I guess of sorts

I laugh and he smiles, I can tell
Can't you sometimes hear smiles

So I'm listening to that awesome Delilah song again
Thinking of communism that I should be seeking

Inside the brain waves of tonight my pen should
Start its scribbling like a mad poet from the East

I'll be okay if this world
Goes to hell in a handbasket
As long as Mr. Coffee is here and he smiles
Audibly

He grins and tells me the article should happen
I'm sheepish mess of poetic problems

Staring at my guitar I think of how much I need
To finish Tony's song, I'v got the hmmm dadada's down

Talking to you has just been a blessing for me
I hope you see that you're not the only one with
(the audible frin)

I'll be okay if this world
Goes to hell in a handbasket
As long as Mr. Coffee is here and he smiles

Communism can wait
I'd rather hear from my friend
Ken

Published by Kady Birdwhistle

I am a woman seeking to learn more about different writing communities while pursuing my college education. I am currently obsessed with freelance writing, Charlaine Harris (author), yoga,Christianity, Hindu...  View profile

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  • J L Carey Jr2/25/2011

    cool.

  • Devrie Wise8/20/2010

    Great title. I couldn't help but click on it. It reminds me of all the mornings when I swim around it a pot of coffee because I'm putting something off for the afternoon.

  • Coffee Mugg12/31/2008

    I forgot you even wrote thins one, I still say Good Job Miss Kady

  • Tracy8/3/2008

    Everyone should smile audibly.

  • Matthew Moran3/25/2008

    You have a unique voice, but a weak style. Edit it a little bit and it'll be good to go.

  • mimpi3/3/2008

    very original and creative!! 5 stars ++...just loved it, hun.

  • cathiesbloggs3/2/2008

    Creative !!!

  • Kim Linton3/1/2008

    Very insightful Kady!

  • Steven West2/29/2008

    I consider that to be a rather offbeat poem. Definitely different. I liked it.

  • April Lorier2/29/2008

    Very good, Kady! You had a lot published in one day. I'm out of breath trying to comment on them all!

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