Comparisons II

A Modification of My Earlier Poem Comparisons

Peter Flom
Subtler than sobs
Tears slide down my cheeks.
More deceitful than lies
Sighs escape.
More enduring than passion
Love endures.
Longer lasting than blows
Words damage.

Published by Peter Flom

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  • rama devi nina5/31/2011

    Powerful and true. Well done.

  • Don Rothra5/30/2011

    How true, How true.

  • Orchiolum5/30/2011

    The damage done by words can indeed last longer than blows. Bruises heal, but the echo of words can ripple through space forever. My poem "Words" grew from such an experience. Glad you kept the four lines Peter!

  • Donna Cavanagh5/30/2011

    Words damage a great deal. Their effects are long-lasting or even permanent. Great post, Peter!

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