Concentric Love

When Your World Has Changed Just Know

mimpi
We moving in circles
Hoping to run into our hearts
Sneering and swearing in jest
Frenetic to collide and dissolve
Little realising that the circles are concentric

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Mimpi (Mou D) is freelance writer who writes to express her thoughts and views on this enriching journey of life. She is always looking forward to learn and share her insights while living life to the fullest.  View profile

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  • Deepak4/6/2010

    Mimpi! Our life is like a circle and we most of the time keep moving in circles, little do we realize that we need to take some break from the mechanical and routine life. I loved it.
    Deepak

  • T.S. Garp4/1/2010

    Love can do that, good poem!

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky3/31/2010

    Powerful.

  • Tony Payne3/25/2010

    Very good.

  • Bridget Ilene Delaney3/22/2010

    Reading, I've had to do other things and then my Internet goes out at night :( Finally catching up!

  • Dan Reveal3/19/2010

    This is so interesting! I read it more than once to try and find the full meaning. Just excellent!!

  • Lucky M Diaz3/19/2010

    Awesome. . .so much said in so few lines!

  • Lucky M Diaz3/19/2010

    Awesome. . .so much said in so few lines!

  • Jack Wellman3/19/2010

    I believe you have beautiful insight into human beings. I think your line that we don't even know we're going in concentric directions is amazingly true. Nicely done.

  • Jan Corn3/19/2010

    Lovely and profound!

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