Creepy Crawlies

Charlotte Kuchinsky
Recently our house was invaded by spiders. A good many of them were brown recluses. My husband was bit twice. Luckily he isn't very sensitive to the bites so he just got sick. I'm very allergic so I was lived in fear. To release the stress I wrote this silly poem.

Creepy crawlies

Of day and night

Why do you come

And give a fright?

What do you want?

What do you seek?

Why do you turn

Our lives so bleak?

You made us sick

From bites you took.

Gave us fever

And chills that shook.

Fellow creature,

Don't make us kill.

We can't afford

The extra bill.

Keep to yourself

And so will we.

All God's creatures

Should remain free.

 


Published by Charlotte Kuchinsky

I'm an author, columnist and poet. I have done extensive business, creative and technical writing and written curriclum for high schools, colleges and universities. I am currently the principal writer for a...  View profile

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  • Rena Sherwood12/15/2011

    Very cute. I love spiders -- to a point.

  • Sandy James12/5/2011

    Brown recluse can be very dangerous. Your husband is lucky!

  • Delicia Powers11/10/2011

    Very cool...:0)

  • Sondra C11/5/2011

    glad to see you back. I guess I am going to return as well. Love your writing

  • Crystal Ray11/2/2011

    This gave me a chill just thinking about it. I am terrified of spiders. I can't even stand to look at a picture of spider! Excellent poem on a scary subject. I'm sorry you've had to deal with this.

  • Memmay Moore10/31/2011

    Call an exterminator ASAP...Don't fool around with your health.

  • Cycy Larson10/30/2011

    Great poem - frankly spiders make me feel creepy :)

  • Mike Powers10/30/2011

    A marvellously entertaining and spooooooky poem. Thanks!

  • Bridgitte Williams10/29/2011

    EEKK! I hate spiders. A friend of mine got bitten by a brown recluse. She did not know it and a sore appeared on her leg. It was much like a poisonous snake bite, it left a big scar. Don't underestimate spiders. :-) They give me the creepy crawlies, too.

  • Lori Borys10/28/2011

    YIKES! I feel for you Charlie! We have been invaded by some not so dangerous black spiders and but mostly in the basement. Outside however we have an abundance of wolf spiders, a type of funnel web that have coated virtually every shrub/plant and created multilevel comunities on every inside corner you can find; including the corners created by the stone walls and planters touching the ground. Crazy stuff this fall! I'm very allergic to bites too. I can't even begin to imagine what would happen if I got bit by a recluse, mosquitos cause me enough grief. I hope you can steer clear but if it comes down to survival, stomp them!

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