Dance with Me

David Lanier
Dance with me sweet thing,
shake it, you wont break it.
Your body flickers like the flame
of some wild crazy candle,
and we dance the night away.
Dance with me sweet thing,
dream it, you can be it.
Your body caresses me
like some soft summer breeze,
and we roll the night away.
Dance with me sweet thing,
be it, can you see it?
Your body has the fire
of a flowing red volcano,
and i dream the night away.

My Blog~Mystical Poetry, Prose, and Political Viewpoints

Published by David Lanier

Born and raised in Salt Lake City, Utah. Grew up working in the family business. Worked at the Grand Canyon in'93, and fell in love with the power of nature. Spent some time in the Army. Married for a few ye...  View profile

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  • Donald Rothra5/15/2010

    Nice work, David

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky5/13/2010

    Stunning imagery.

  • James Ford5/11/2010

    Like it a lot. Fire! Passion! Dreams......

  • Carla M. Swinke5/11/2010

    You painted a picture with your words!

  • Cyn Bagley5/11/2010

    Enjoyed the images, sounds, and rhythms. left smiling!!!

  • C. Enyo5/11/2010

    A great rhythm and flow - this piece has energy - bravo!

  • Someones Sister5/11/2010

    I didn't know you could shake it like that you make danzig wanna speak spanish dorito farito robert denero. Shaking my hips wow. What an amazing write.

  • Someones Sister5/11/2010

    Wonderful I love dancing. I always shook it like that.

  • Sue Gibson5/10/2010

    I was thinking the same thing Faye said. Just set it to music....

  • Donald Rothra5/10/2010

    Good one David

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