Date with Derecho

mimpi
The storm was fuming aimless
The squall just about uprooted my basis
I struggled to stand firm and honest
I looked up, the sky dark and ominous

Tiny nature grains gushed into mouth
Disillusioned of destiny and muddled
I helplessly gave in, I had to
I remembered derechos

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Mimpi (Mou D) is freelance writer who writes to express her thoughts and views on this enriching journey of life. She is always looking forward to learn and share her insights while living life to the fullest.  View profile

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  • Nora10/1/2009

    Very well written.

  • Andrew Brinckerhoff6/27/2009

    Hey, trying to build a community of writers here on AC. Would love to hear from you and be able to exchange work for feedback

  • John Smither5/22/2009

    Well written.

  • Deepak5/19/2009

    Great! You have power and vision, therefore you will always stand firm and straight in your life.

  • Donald Pennington5/17/2009

    I almost saw this!

  • Kristie Leong M.D.5/16/2009

    Your poetry has such powerful imagery. Beautifully written, as all of yours are. :-)

  • Nikki5/16/2009

    Good work!

  • T. Hillukka5/16/2009

    Nice, I enjoyed this.

  • J L Carey Jr5/16/2009

    Very nice mimpi. I liked the indirect rhyme in the first stanza too.

  • Dina Quirion5/16/2009

    I like it!!!!

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