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  • Rebecca Bardelli8/4/2011

    Nice haiku!

  • Silense Smith6/27/2011

    I like the visual you put with it. It kind of has that haunted shattered feel.

  • Don Rothra6/16/2011

    Back for a second look. PVs for you.

  • Jenny Sperandeo1/30/2011

    Nice!

  • Dan Reveal1/16/2011

    Great work!!

  • Donald Rothra12/26/2010

    Good one.

  • Pyroo11/29/2010

    im lost on this one but its deep...that prob why im so lost!!!!

  • J L Carey Jr11/23/2010

    very cool poem. trying to catch up on some of your work. always enjoyable.

  • Vikas D. Reddy11/17/2010

    It's astonishing to be able to convey more meaning with a few words than with an entire paragraph.

  • RM11/15/2010

    Mmmmm... I'm not musing about the exquisite verse, just the exquisite meaning.

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