Death

Nora
Death came to my house one day

To take me to heaven's door

I asked him to wait

Coz I wanted to live some more

Death came to my house again

And took away my beloved

He did not give us a chance to say good bye

He did not give us a chance to say any more

Now when death comes to me again

What should I say?

Take me to my beloved

Or let me live some more?

Published by Nora

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  • Sheri Fresonke Harper11/26/2008

    Good conflict, very sad :) Sheri

  • Kristie Leong M.D.11/21/2008

    A very meaningful poem. Nicely expressed.

  • Momie Tullottes11/19/2008

    Excellent poetry! :-)

  • Mike Spain11/17/2008

    excellent read

  • Rekha11/14/2008

    The poem ends with the question, with 2 options. and both are difficult to follow! .............and answer is again a famous line"To be or not to be that's the question!"

  • Secretsides11/11/2008

    Beautiful poem. I relate to it and the sentiment in it. Excellent heart felt poem

  • MADAM BUTTERFLY11/11/2008

    excellent poem , touching and moved my heart!

  • Chris Radtke11/10/2008

    Great poem

  • Janie Ellington11/10/2008

    Just be aware--it is about the experience of life. Death cannot be separated out of it.

  • Momma J11/10/2008

    Agree with Darin's comment. Lovely poem.

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