DEATH

A Death Perspective Written in Haiku

Orchiolum
DEATH

Death is beginning
or the echo's sad ending
perspective decides

Published by Orchiolum

Progressive, tree hugging, Earth loving free thinker. When I see the Royals I am reminded of a world in need.   View profile

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  • Joshua Cleveland 11/11/2011

    Not to be a critic or anything, but your second line actually has eight syllables instead of seven.

    Aside from that, it was a beautiful haiku, I specifically liked the picture you choose to go with it :).

  • pamela smith 5/28/2011

    For me... It's only the beginning.

  • John S. Path 11/27/2010

    destructive in principle.

  • Paul Rance 2/1/2010

    Stunning - both the poem and the picture.

  • Vikas D. Reddy 1/12/2010

    you mastered saying a lot in a few words, great poem

  • Richard Bruness 3/24/2009

    very deep

  • Christine Bruness 9/22/2008

    Yes, indeed.

  • Heather Carreiro 8/28/2008

    Nicely written. I also like the photo you've chosen to go with it.

  • Morton Templeton 8/4/2008

    Great haiku yes it is all prespective !!!!!!!!!

  • maker 5/11/2008

    So very much said in so few words!

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