Death's Kiss

A Halloween Haiku

Phillip Tobias
Walking home alone
Black sky, blood moon. Death in love
No one hears you scream

Published by Phillip Tobias

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  • Shana Dines 1/16/2010

    Very creepy!

  • David A. Reinstein, LCSW 11/24/2009

    You never drink ... wine!

  • Lynn Pritchett 11/22/2009

    Chilling

  • Jennifer Waite 10/12/2009

    Ooh, spooky and sexy!

  • Dave Schrader 10/11/2009

    That second line really grabs me! :)

  • Karen Curley 10/10/2009

    Ooh! Scary!

  • Susan Sosbe 10/9/2009

    I loved this...awesome ending!

  • Rissa Watkins 10/9/2009

    Oh, scary. Loved it- did anyone else flash to Thriller?

  • Tamara L. Waters 10/9/2009

    Love it - nice imagery!

  • Cathy A Montville 10/9/2009

    Death in love...fabulous! I see you have a name now! Awesome!

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