Deceptive Sun

Lisa R. Strong
The sun shines brightly;
Bathes the day in golden light;
Winter wind still blows;

Bitter air seeps through;
Drafty old windows and doors;
Chills me to the bone;

I stay safe indoors;
The sun cannot deceive me;
I sip on hot tea;

In here it feels warm;
Yet my hands and feet are cold;
Ice forms on the panes;

A cough that won't leave;
Keeps me from going outside;
Errands don't get done;

I wrap myself up;
It is only eight degrees;
And I write instead;

When I fall asleep;
Escaping the bitter cold;
I will dream of spring.

Published by Lisa R. Strong

I was born and raised in Binghamton NY. I have been writing short stories since I was eight years old, and poetry since I was a teenager. I also write prayers, meditations, and opinion articles. My dre...  View profile

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  • Charles Reynolds3/16/2008

    Ahhh, the dream of spring! I think I'll go back to bed until then. Nicely done!

  • Missy H.3/5/2008

    Hope you get over your cough

  • Nancie Norton3/5/2008

    I live in Northwest Florida, but I could feel that bitter cold,see the ice on your window pane,and feel that cold wind comming in around those drafty old doors and windows! You truely have a marvelous gift as a poet, your work puts my imagination into overdrive. Thank you for letting us spend the day with you.GREAT WORK! Peace.....Nancie

  • Steven West3/2/2008

    The sun can be deceptive when it's bitter cold outside. Very nice poem.

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA3/2/2008

    very nice poem, my dear sister. It is your great sacrifice to write in so cold.

  • Shanelle Diaz3/1/2008

    Wonderful imagery. . .I have felt this way before and can totally relate. Thanks for sharing!

  • Coffee Mugg2/29/2008

    you are getting so good at haiku's. Good Job Miss Lisa.ken

  • Justice Lives Not2/29/2008

    Another excelent job here.

  • Mary E. Coe2/29/2008

    Fantastic! This is so wonderful.

  • Kady the Hippie Woodstock2/29/2008

    WOW!!!!!! This is such a wonderful poem!!!!! I'm really loving this, sis!!!!!! You are a wonderful poetess!!!!! 20000000000000000 stars!!!!!

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