Deprivation

From the Collection: Songs of Epigenesis

J L Carey Jr
The starved dog lay withering
Tethered in its cold kennel
Each breath drawn of dumb habit

Uselessly licking raw skin
Like all its unburied bones
But the wounds were internal

Published by J L Carey Jr

J L Carey Jr, Author of the book Turning Pages, is a writer and an artist living in Michigan with his wife and three children. He holds an MFA in Creative Writing from National University and a BA in Englis...  View profile

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  • Ruth Cox aka abitosunshine8/10/2010

    Bless you for this blessing verse for the animals; and may their abusers be cursed by the memory of their victims.

  • Paul Rance2/16/2010

    One of your very best, Jeff. Had a girlfriend whose neighbor neglected his dog. The guy ended up getting murdered, so, makes you think...

  • Angie Mohr12/26/2009

    Very stark and moving...

  • KL Lopez11/8/2009

    I hate what your neighbour did to the dog...

  • KL Lopez11/8/2009

    I hate what your neighbour did to the dog...

  • Heather Kristina Thomas8/23/2009

    Sad and touching. Lovely poem.

  • Shaheen Darr8/21/2009

    very sad and touches the heart :(

  • Branwen668/20/2009

    No redemption here... :(

  • Walton S. Tissot8/20/2009

    very nice. Sad but well formed. Deprivation

  • Nora8/20/2009

    Nice poem but sad.

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